Re: Quick grammar check please.
Not necessarily. It's a long piece and I, for one, have not had time to go through and do it justice. The number of views simply reflects the number of people who have clicked on the thread title. We might all have clicked on it, seen the length of it, and thought "Sorry, I really don't have time to do that properly" and gone away to answer shorter questions in a different thread.
I have had a quick skim over the first two paragraphs. Paragraph 2 has three slight errors:
- it's "evolved into"
- You need a comma after "Today"
- I think "examples or Roman" is a typo and you meant "examples of Roman".
Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.