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As a computer engineer I know very well that knowledge about computers and the information on the developments around them have no limits. Therefore a position that will offer me new insights and information, but also investigating new innovations and applications around the computers would be very attractive to me.
A main concern on my computers is programming. I would be interested to participate in any project related to programming, both around the burning issues of computer security, of cloud computing and the always apropos databases, and around any other subject. Finally I would love to see her near the premises of the * and work on the latest equipment in terms of hardware and software.
Thanks in advance!
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