[Grammar] EMAIL WRITING CORRECTION

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Neelam Rawat

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Hi,

Today i got register my id in this site.
I want to improve my email writing . It will be helpful if you correct my email on daily basis.

Regards,

Neelam Rawat
 

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Hi,

Today I [STRIKE]got register my id[/STRIKE] [STRIKE]in[/STRIKE] joined this site.
I want to improve my email writing. It will be helpful if you correct my email on daily basis.

Regards,

Neelam Rawat

Welcome to the forum. We will help as often as we can but if you post an email every day and expect us to correct it, you will need to show that you are learning something each time you post and see our corrections. We are not here to write emails for you, we are here to help you improve your English for general use.

Remember the rules of written English:

- Start every sentence with a capital letter.
- Always capitalise the word "I" (first person singular)
- End every sentence with a single punctuation mark.
- Do not put a space before a comma, full stop, question mark or exclamation mark.
- Always put a space after a comma, full stop, question mark or exclamation mark.
 

Neelam Rawat

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Hi,

Thanks to regard to your email, since a long time I was searching for a site who can help me to correct my writing skills.

I am very glad to have a membership of this site. Your team is very agile, yesterday night, I have requested to your team to do correction of my emails and help me to improve my writing skills, and it was done.

As you said that, I need to show you improvement in my writing skills. I will assure you that you will see the improvement in my writing skills with your feedbacks.


I must tell my friends to join this site.

Thanks & regards,
Neelam Rawat
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Neelam Rawat

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India
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Please do correction on my email.
 
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