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    Default Help with a heading

    Dear teachers,

    I try to write a heading to the small text that describes my company's services. There are three main things to be mentioned 1) website recovery services (after being hacked) 2) website viruses removal services 3) website protection services (having been cured, the website is needed to be protected to prevent further intrusions)

    My heading is
    "Hacked website recovery, viruses removal and website protection services"

    Does this work?

    Thank you

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    Default Re: Help with a heading

    Yes it does. Alternatively, you could try "Services for website protection, post-hacking recovery, and virus removal", which avoids repeating "website".
    I'm not a teacher of English, but I have spoken it for (almost) all of my life....

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    Default Re: Help with a heading

    Quote Originally Posted by Grumpy View Post
    Yes it does. Alternatively, you could try "Services for website protection, post-hacking recovery, and virus removal", which avoids repeating "website".
    I like it! And I don't like repetition. Thank you very much.

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