Is the following sentence acceptable?
Huang Chunming , a senior Taiwanese literary figure and teacher, talked about a recent story about him.
The original meaning of the sentence is as written. I tried to rewrite the sentence as written. Is it acceptable?
1. Huang Chnming is a senior Taiwanese literary figure and teacher.
2. Recently, something happened to him.
3. He talked about the event that upset him.
Huang Chun-ming, a senior Taiwanese literary figure and teacher, recently had something happen to him which upset him and which he talked about.
Last edited by Ashiuhto; 27-Mar-2013 at 03:54.