Please see my amendments and suggestions in red above. I think the paragraphs need to be re-ordered but I only have time to deal with the grammar at the moment.
Hello, I am applying for a research technician position and I would like to ask
foryou to check my grammar. mistakeI would really appreciate it! Thanks! !!!
Dear Recruitment Team (it would be better if you could find out the name of the person dealing with the applications)
I am writing in response to the advertisement on ....... website for the Research Technician position.
I graduated in Biology from
theJagiellonian University, with specializationspecialising in Cell Biology. During my studies I gained knowledge of cancer biology, immunology and statistics. I have taken several laboratory courses, whereduring which I have been workingworked with PCR, cell cultures, fluorescence and electron microscopy. Moreover, I am competent with gel electrophoresis, lectin blotting, chromatography and spectrophotometry, which (all of which, some of which or just one of which) I haveused for my master's thesis research. Currently I am broadening my knowledge at theby doing postgraduate studies in Molecular Biology. The research area that interests me the most is cancer biology. I have a passion for working in the laboratory. I would like to take part in research and be a part of the team and support developing and validating a novel form of gamma delta T-cell immunotherapy for ovarian cancer and also provide technical support for clinical trial of cell therapy. (The sentence I have underlined needs a complete rewrite as it's very confusing - too long apart from anything else.)
I am a self-disciplined person with good organizational skills and the ability to work in a group or independently. I learn quickly
easily learn new thingsand I am open to new challenges. I am interested in working for King’s College, London because of its strong reputation as
a university and research institution.
I believe that I have the capability and potential to undertake this Research Technician position. I
would like to haverelish the opportunity forto develop a technical career in Translational Medicine to gain experience of research in the environment of a leading Clinical Research Organisation.
I look forward to hearing from you and having the opportunity to further discuss my qualifications. Thank you for your time and consideration.
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