***NOT A TEACHER***
"You don't need 1) when there's no 2) to follow," Rover said.
Please, would you take a look at this sentence and correct my grammatical mistakes.
1.They must think it is funny to take care of someone like myself, who had once stood on the top and now has become an outcast.
Please, is there any teacher who could help me with this question.
Please, could someone correct my sentence in my question above.
I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.