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    Teacher, is this sentence OK?

    Ms. Mary said the cost of the school transcript would be $50 even though there are only 3 lines on that sheet and she enquired if I would like to get the transcript.

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    Re: would be

    Quote Originally Posted by thomas615 View Post
    Teacher, is this sentence OK?

    Ms. Mary said the cost of the school transcript would be $50 even though there are only 3 lines on that sheet and she enquired if I would like to get the transcript.
    It's grammatical, but not good stylistically.
    "Mary said that the cost of the school transcript would be $50 even though there were only three lines on the sheet. She asked me if I wanted it."
    Note the back shifting of reported speech.

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