Please help me correct the following sentence. Thanks!
When the privileged students who take their advantages for granted grow up, holding the social decision-making power some day in the future, their decision-making and thinking will also get rid of the real world that they don’t understand.
Last edited by Ashiuhto; 07-Apr-2013 at 15:36.
It would help both us and anyone else reading your text if you could break it down into a series of shorter sentences.