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    conjunctions

    I think the conjunctions 'because' and 'so' are not natural and coherent. Could you help me check it and make it more natural? Thank you.
    Because my roommate was ill, I should take her to the hospital. So I forgot it.

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    Re: conjunctions

    Quote Originally Posted by ziawj2 View Post
    I think the conjunctions 'because' and 'so' are not natural and coherent. Could you help me check it and make it more natural? Thank you.
    Because my roommate was ill, I should take her to the hospital. So I forgot it.
    The whole statement is unnatural. Can you explain what you're trying to say in a different way?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: conjunctions

    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    The whole statement is unnatural. Can you explain what you're trying to say in a different way?
    My roommate was ill and I had to take her to the hospital. So I forgot it.

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    Re: conjunctions

    Quote Originally Posted by ziawj2 View Post
    My roommate was ill and I had to take her to the hospital, so I forgot it.
    Assuming your listener knows what "it" is, this is okay.
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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