Does this sentence sound natural? ' our school has employed Mr. Hassan as a Headteac'
Does this sentence sound natural? If so, would you amend the parts which might be weak or could have been better typed.
Our school has employed Mr. Hassan as a Headteacher - I though he was as uptight as the previous one, Mr. Gamal, when I first saw him shout at one of the kindergarten students, but he turned out to be a kind, approachable and wise man that use his wisdom to solve problems among students, and much to my surprise, he's stopped Jack from bullying.
I wish I had better English, but I work hard to improve it. I'm studying for IGCSE, so I'm only interested in BrE.