Today I went to my friends home for her baby shower.She has 4years old boy. His name is sam. His son and my dauther both are friends. My dauther likes to goes to sams home.She was so excited to go his home. My dauther also 4years old.When we went to sams home she looks happy.She had a fun there.Then we had lunch and came home. I had lots of work today .But i didn't want to do. Then my husband made a tea.then we drank a tea and my dauther drank milk.after that my daughter went to bed.
Please tell me my mistake in this story.
Last edited by emsr2d2; 14-Apr-2013 at 00:05.
Please post writing in the writing section; I've moved your post.
Please give your thread a title that suggests what the post is about. You could have called this "My day" or "Baby Shower" or "Going to Sam's House." "Hi" is never a good thread title unless you are asking about how to greet people.
I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.