Gilplease help me to reconstruct my letter of request for changing of dates of annual leave...
I would like to request to allow me to move my date of annual leave plan for the year 2013.
The note has to be directed to someone -
April 10, 2013
Attn: Human Relations Department
The note should be dated - April 10, 1014. Put the date near the top of the note.
Possible rewrite: "I request that I be allowed to change the dates of my annual leave for 2013".
Original plan: December 15, 2013 to January 23, 2014. (40days) - Capitalize the names of months and separate "40" and
days" - 40 days
New plan: December 1, 2013 to January 2, 2014. (33days) - Same as above. Why would you lose seven days of leave?
The main reason
offor my leave modification is to take the opportunity to celebrate with the whole family the 95th birthday of our grandmother to be held on the 6th of December, 2013. (This woman could not be the grandmother to your whole family. She may be your grandmother but she most probably is an aunt, sister, mother, cousin, or has some other relationship to the other members of your family)
Thank you and I
thereforehope for your favorable consideration.