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    Dear Sir or Madam,

    I have a restaurant called ‘Sunshine Restaurant’ and I registered my company with the name at Companies House. I have been doing business in the local area for 5 years. My reputation is growing day after day and I have many royal clients. But someone opened a restaurant called ‘New Sunshine Restaurant’ in the area and he poached some of my employees. Thus I had an argument with the owner of the restaurant regarding the issue and we had a couple of conflicts recently. The competitor’s company name is similar to mine and even worse is that his company name implies enhancement and exceeding. He passes shoddy food off as identical standard and traditional Chinese food with mine. The owner of the restaurant is not from China at all, so dishes from his restaurant are abuse of traditional Chinese food.
    I would like to get your advice about how to stop the competitor continuing using the name. I am informed that a judge can make a decision for using similar or identical company names, but I am not sure how much the trial will cost me. How can I start the case? Whether can the judge impose a temporary order in order to restrict disruption to my business. What kind of jurisdiction does a judge have over determination of claim or legal costs? I don’t have my own registered trademark. I’m worried that the owner has registered the name. Under such a circumstance, it seems I am in breach of the law. Will this affect me differently?

    yours sincerely,

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    Default Re: Can someone correct my essay below, please?

    Can you explain to us what this has to do with the English language? It strikes me that you need to consult a lawyer, not an English language forum.
    Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.

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    Default Re: Can someone correct my essay below, please?

    Sorry. I didn't explain in the first place. I'm learning interpretation by myself, this is one of articles which I'm practising translation. But I'm not very confident with it, especially grammer, so I come here to ask help. Is that ok?

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    Default Re: Can someone correct my essay below, please?

    also, i see the others sending their articles to ask for correction, that is why i did.

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    Default Re: Can someone correct my essay below, please?

    Quote Originally Posted by chrislinperry View Post
    Also, I see the others sending their articles to ask for correction, that is why I did.
    That's fine as long as you're not asking for help with homework or assignments. If you are learning English and learning how to do translation on your own, then we can help but only so far. We obviously won't be able to tell you whether what you've written is a good translation from the original language.

    I will take a look at your piece a little later.
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    Default Re: Can someone correct my essay below, please?

    Hi emsr2d2,

    thank you for correcting my last post.
    Also, thank you in advance for looking at my piece later.
    I'm waiting.

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