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    #1

    Please help me correct this (My English is not improving)

    Dear Mr/Mrs,

    It's been a while since the last time you sent me a message.
    I have been very busy with assignments.
    Is the internship program still open to me? Full-time 8 weeks long on July?
    Waiting for your reply.


    Regards,
    XXX


    IS THIS CORRECT?

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      • English Teacher
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    Re: Please help me correct this (My English is not improving)

    Quote Originally Posted by jomo27 View Post
    Dear Mr/Mrs,

    It's been a while since the last time you sent me a message.
    I have been very busy with assignments.
    Is the internship program still open to me? Full-time 8 weeks long on July?
    Waiting for your reply.


    Regards,
    XXX


    IS THIS CORRECT?
    No. What do you mean by "Full-time 8 weeks long on July?"?

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