Bassim
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- Joined
- Mar 1, 2008
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Bosnian
- Home Country
- Bosnia Herzegovina
- Current Location
- Sweden
Dear teachers,
Please, would you look at these sentences and correct my mistakes. I am wondering if they are written in a proper English:
1. A few notes of an old tune were enough to summon up the memories of his childhood.
2. After remaining silent and contemplating for a while, he told her that their relationship was finished.
3. Running and shouting after the thieves, he did not notice that he was barefoot.
Please, would you look at these sentences and correct my mistakes. I am wondering if they are written in a proper English:
1. A few notes of an old tune were enough to summon up the memories of his childhood.
2. After remaining silent and contemplating for a while, he told her that their relationship was finished.
3. Running and shouting after the thieves, he did not notice that he was barefoot.