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    Please help me correct the following paragraph. Thanks!
    In the future, I plan to study in the UK. However, studying abroad takes a great amount of money which I canít afford. Therefore, I hope somebody will fund /patronize me to support my studying. Moreover, my ambition is to become a dentist or a forensic scientist. Letís wait and see whether I will reach my goal 15 years later.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ashiuhto View Post
    Please help me correct the following paragraph. Thanks!
    In the future, I plan to study in the UK. However, studying abroad takes a great large amount of money which, at the moment, I canít afford don't have. Therefore, I hope somebody will fund/patronize me to support my studying studies. Moreover, My ambition is to become a dentist or a forensic scientist. Letís wait and see whether I will reach my goal in 15 years' time. later.
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