[Essay] a motto of myself

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Ashiuhto

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Please help me correct the following paragraph. Thanks!

I have always been dreaming of becoming an actress or a singer in the future. My ambition is to be a world-famous entertainer. This is my goal in life, so I encourage myself go “Just do it,” which is also a motto of myself and which encourages me to make my dream come true.
 
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"I have always dreamt of becoming a an actress or a singer in the future. My ambition is to be a world-famous entertainer. This is my goal in life, so I encourage myself to "just do it!" This is also my personal motto which encourages me to make my dreams come true."

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