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    writting problems

    Hi everyone,
    Is it correct to use the following structure in a formal essay when giving several reasons proceeding each other?

    "Due to
    temperature rise in the current century, and due to development of the regions with rising temperature and also temperature importance as a basic element in climate system, it is important to know in what pace the temperature is rising and what areas it affects in each period."


    Thanks for your help in advance:)
    Last edited by myalterego2012; 26-Apr-2013 at 13:18.

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    Re: writting problems

    Welcome to the forum.

    Before we comment on the content, please edit your post following the rules of written English:

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    Re: writting problems

    I am Sorry. Thanks for your advice.

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