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    Default professional chef

    Please help me correct the following paragraph. Thanks!

    I love cooking. Nothing gives me more pure happiness than to pick out a recipe, get the best ingredients, try making it, and then enjoying the results. (When I was little,) I used to watch in amazement as my grandmother prepared delicious meals almost without effort, so I suppose it was under her influence that I eventually took up cooking as a hobby. I find fulfillment in cooking for loved ones because seeing their happiness when they enjoy something. Therefore, my dream in the future is to be a professional chef that can ignite my passion for food.

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    Default Re: professional chef

    It's pretty good.
    Quote Originally Posted by Ashiuhto View Post
    I love cooking. Nothing gives me more pure happiness than to pick out a recipe, get the best ingredients, try making it, and then enjoying (If you use 'enjoying', it sounds as though you mean 'try making it and (try) enjoying) the results. (When I was little,) I used to watch in amazement as my grandmother prepared delicious meals almost without effort, so I suppose it was under her influence that I eventually took up cooking as a hobby. I find fulfillment in cooking for loved ones because I love seeing their happiness when they enjoy something. Therefore, my dream in for the future is to be a professional chef that can, which will ignite my passion for food.
    I think your passion for food has already been ignited. Perhaps being a professional chef will fuel your passion.
    Please do not edit your question after it has received a response. Such editing can make the response hard for others to understand.


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