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Please help me correct the following paragraph. Thanks!
I love cooking. Nothing gives me more pure happiness than to pick out a recipe, get the best ingredients, try making it, and then enjoying the results. (When I was little,) I used to watch in amazement as my grandmother prepared delicious meals almost without effort, so I suppose it was under her influence that I eventually took up cooking as a hobby. I find fulfillment in cooking for loved ones because seeing their happiness when they enjoy something. Therefore, my dream in the future is to be a professional chef that can ignite my passion for food.
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