Ashiuhto
Senior Member
- Joined
- Nov 30, 2010
- Member Type
- English Teacher
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- Taiwan
- Current Location
- Taiwan
Please help me correct the following paragraph. Thanks!
My hobby is painting, which brightens my life. Painting is the language of creative mind. It benefits me by broadening my thoughts. I gain self-esteem and a confidence I never knew I possessed. Through painting I discover in myself a greater appreciation of the beauty of nature.
My hobby is painting, which brightens my life. Painting is the language of creative mind. It benefits me by broadening my thoughts. I gain self-esteem and a confidence I never knew I possessed. Through painting I discover in myself a greater appreciation of the beauty of nature.
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