the homeland, and their personality, and their age.- the homelands, their personalities, and their age.
Firstly, the difference between Mrs. Croft and the narrator is the homeland.- the first difference ...
Mrs. Croft from America- is
significant different- difference
set in the home-???
she in depended- she depends/is dependent
To illustrate,- repetition
her daughter come- comes
food which is soap-food, which is soup
narrator travel - travels- check third person singular verbs for the -s
and egg.- singular?
biggest different- noun
different thinking- ways of thinking
always thinking- is...
and his family feel- and make...
Mrs. Croft life- possessive
narrator life which - comma missing
are result for one different- are the result of one difference
from one to other- unnecessary phrase
that what happen- that is what happens