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    Default Please, Check my sentences.

    A :
    First, The TV is a messenger which give us information.
    The weather forecast, news, and so on. We can get much information through the TV.

    Second, The TV is our friend.
    When you are alone, The TV gives you great pleasure.

    B :
    Yea.. I agree with you there. but there is another aspect of the TV.
    Sometimes, We are hooked on it, so we can't do anything while watching TV.

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    Default Re: Please, Check my sentences.

    A :
    First, TV is a messenger which gives us information.
    The weather forecast, news, and so on. We can get a lot of information from TV.

    Second, TV is our friend.
    When you are alone, TV gives you great pleasure.

    B :
    Yeah... I agree with you there. But there is another aspect of TV.
    Sometimes, we are hooked on it, so we can't do anything else while watching TV.

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