[Grammar] Kindly correct below sentence in the scene of grammar

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nakash

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This annual report captures Organization' contribution to delivering quality exertions in the field of human rights, advocacy, lobbying and sustainable development in the different areas of Pakistan.
 

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This annual report [strike]captures[/strike] covers/deals with/is concerned with Organization' (why does this word have a capital letter and why is there an apostrophe at the end?") contribution to delivering quality exertions (this word doesn't make sense but I don't know what you mean so I cannot suggest an alternative) in the field of human rights, advocacy, lobbying and sustainable development in [strike]the[/strike] different areas of Pakistan.

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