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    mathewvarghese_007 is offline Newbie
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    correct this sentence

    correct this sentence - :Joined as a teller and promoted to Internal Auditor within a year.

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    Re: correct this sentence

    I would use passive: He joined as a teller and was promoted to Internal Auditor within a year.

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    Re: correct this sentence

    I would say, "Please correct this sentence".

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    Re: correct this sentence

    It's not a "sentence"--no subject.

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    Re: correct this sentence

    I would say, "Please correct this sentence".



    Ouch !!!

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