Post from diary to check
I don't know where it could be
writewritten better. The thing is that I came to the UK 1 year ago and I try to do my best to make my English better and better every day (Or: to improve my English). Some things have a success, some of them still don't develop at all. Today I met my step-brother, whose native language is English as he has been living in the UK since his age of 3. I decided to create a diary of our relationship in English and would like to give it somebody to check my mistakes... I hope that I achieve one daysuch a result one day andthat I won't need nobody'sanybody’s help in that; so good should becomeswill become my language... but, unfortunately, it's not for now: ((I guess you can show me my mistakes even what I'm writing now)
So, here is my first post and I hope somebody gives me
advicessome advice and checks my writing for the first time. Thank you! xx
Today it happened:
in my life whenI met you, my brother, the cutest angel in the world. You know, one day I am going to give you these notes and be open-minded in front of you, when the necessary time comes… Now it's only the beginning of our communication when we start to get to know each other after long years within we were separatelyseparated from each other and had different lifelives and events (Or: experiences) … I was dreaming to meet you all that time… I was growing up with thoughts about you, my little brother, and… was keepthinking that you makemade somebody happy every day, because they could see your smile and eyes, but I was far away from you at that moment. Anyway, I believe that God made everything; finally, in a special way and from now you will be the biggest part of my life. Today I felt todayhow close you'reyou are to me and I cannot describe exactly all the feelings that were today inside of me . I love you so-so much. I knew it always and today, I could feel in my heart this clear and deep feeling to you, looking into your eyes and seeing your smile after such a long period in my life. Now you make me happy too, my angel. I am happy to be your sister and I hope our friendship (or better to say brother-sister-ship) will be very special and very great!
februar, German speaking, no teacher