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    Question Please help me

    Hello, please could you correct me this letter of aplication? the level is for FCE. thank you very much.


    Dear Sir or Madam,

    I am writing to you concerning the study grants advertisement, which I saw in Monday’s issue “The Guardian” and I would apply for a grant to study English in one of your schools this summer.

    The reason why I am interested in this English course is because I am keen to improve my English and would like the opportunity to practice my English with native speakers. And I am considering studying my degree in the UK when I finish the school.

    I need this grant because I can’t afford to study in UK. In my family we are 6 siblings and this could be my opportunity to study abroad and learn about the British culture and the way of life there. It would be better for me if I could be in your London school as I have my aunt living there.

    I am available for interview at any time and look forward to hearing from you.

    Yours faithfully
    Mercedes

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    Re: Please help me

    Dear Sir or Madam,

    I am writing to you concerning the study grants advertisement which I saw in Monday’s issue of “The Guardian”. I would like to apply for a grant to study English in one of your schools this summer.

    The reason why I am interested in this English course is because I am keen to improve my English and would like the opportunity to practice my English with native speakers. And I am considering studying for my degree in the UK when I finish the school.

    I need this grant because I can’t afford to study in UK. In my family, we have 6 siblings and this could be my opportunity to study abroad and learn about the British culture and the way of life there. It would be better for me if I could be in your London school as my aunt is living there.

    I am available for an interview any time and I look forward to hearing from you.

    Yours faithfully,
    Mercedes

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