Suggestions.Hello. I have to write a motivational letter to apply for a bachelor program in one of the European universities. I would appreciate if you could check my letter and correct the mistakes. Thanks in advance
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is *** ***. I am a 19-year-old student at ***, studying Management in Show Business in my second semester. I would like to apply for a place in your university to study Media and Entertainment Management.
of all, studying abroad would be a great opportunity for me to receive the necessary knowledge and experience for my future job in Music Management. The fact that the university is provided with practice facilities with an in-house media production company is very important for me as I consider practical training sto be necessary to acquire thetheoretical knowledge. Furthermore, paid internship during the last year makes this studying program even more attractive for me.
On the other side("on the other side/hand" is usually used when offering an opposing statement) In addition, studying in a different country would help me to improve my English and learn the Dutch language, because the best way to learn languages is through talking todialogue with native speakers. In addition,I would also get a chancehave the opportunity to learn more about Dutch culture and customs.
IíveI have chosen Media and Entertainment Management because Iíve(Try to avoid use of contractions in formal correspondence)I have been interested in different kinds of media and entertainment, especially music, since themy early childhood. ItísIt has always been my dream to work in the music industry and I hope that studying in *** University will help me to achieve my aimgoal.
I consider myself to be a motivated and open-minded person. I like to explore unknown areas of knowledge, develop and improve my skills. I can speak Ukrainian and Russian fluently, also
IímI am working on improving my English every day and starting to learn Dutch.
IímI consider myself to be an optimistic, communicative, creative, reliable and responsible person. My interests include travelling, making photographsphotography, going to concerts and theatre performances and meeting new people from all around the world.
Thank you for considering my request.