Re: TOEFL INTEGRATED TASK
I have underlined some parts of your piece of writing which I think should be changed.
Originally Posted by Edo Walhalla
What is "a reading passage"? I have never heard such a phrase before (I may be mistaken though).
As to "Sanskrit ate it" (or ancient Egypt used to...) - are you using personification here?
Greeks and Romans believed garlic has magical power - one should use the sequence of tenses here: Greeks and Romans believed garlic had magical power. etc
Last edited by englishhobby; 10-May-2013 at 16:12.
If I were a native speaker of English, I would never shut up.)