Re: Can somebody help me to Fix/Improve/Revise this Request Letter?
To whom it may concern
Originally Posted by Tuny0921
I wish to apply for an expedited visa interview appointment.
My name is [full name], date of birth [date of birth], holder of [nationality] passport number [passport number + dates of issue and expiry].
I currently have a visa interview date of May 29th, 2013. However, I understand that it will take three business days to issue my visa, making the issue date June 3rd at the earliest. As I plan to travel on June 4th, I wish to request an earlier interview date.
I wish to travel to the United States of America on June 4th, 2013 to attend my son's college commencement ceremony on June 6th, 2013. My son's name is [full name], his date of birth is [date of birth], his passport number is [passport number]. He is studying at [name of college] and I attach/enclose a copy of my invitation letter to attend this prestigious event.
Please note that I was unable to request an interview date any earlier as I was waiting for the official invitation letter to arrive from the USA.
Thank you for your attention and consideration and I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
[Your full name]
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