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    #1

    letter writing

    Please correction this letter.


    from
    guru
    bangalore.

    To
    Rangnath
    manager.
    sub; agent details

    Dear sir,
    I am guru. the two agents were used in the legislative assembly election result day. the detail is as follows


    anand
    agent
    900000....
    nagraj
    agent.
    89000......

    thanking you sir.

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    Re: letter writing

    You need capital letters.
    Other than that, I don't understand the letter so I can't offer any advice.

    Is it common in your culture to end your letters with "thanking you sir"? Are you sure the person getting the letter is male?
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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