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    Question Proposal of new ideas

    Dear teachers

    Does this sentence read well?

    The novelty of this research is the proposal of new ways of understanding why people spend more than [what] they can pay [for].

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    Re: Proposal of new ideas

    :S Not exactly. Could you give more details about what you are trying to say?
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    Re: Proposal of new ideas

    The novelty of the research, meaning what is new in it, or its contribution, is that it brings or presents new ideas that help us understand why people ...

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    Re: Proposal of new ideas

    Well, that explanation is very close to what I believe you want. What do you think of this:

    The novelty of this research is that it proposes new theories for why people spend beyond their budgets/means.
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    Re: Proposal of new ideas

    How about this one?

    The novelty of the research is the presentation of new ideas that help us understand why people spend more than they earn.

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    Re: Proposal of new ideas

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    Well, that explanation is very close to what I believe you want. What do you think of this:

    The novelty of this research is that it proposes new theories for why people spend beyond their budgets/means.
    You posted while I was typing, your example works perfectly.

    Thank you

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    Re: Proposal of new ideas

    You're welcome! :)
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    Re: Proposal of new ideas

    I wonder if we could replace 'theories' with 'mechanisms'.

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    Re: Proposal of new ideas

    Mechanisms are like physical machines. I don't know where you are going with this research project, so I don't know.
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    Re: Proposal of new ideas

    Mechanisms aren't just physical.

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