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I am applying for a master program, there are 5 questions in the application form to be answered.
The one of them is: What business that you have seen internationally has inspired you? I wrote an answer, but pretty unsure about it
So i hope that someone can help me to improve and/or correct mistakes. I appreciate every idea
My answer: The company that inspires me is the internet giant, Google Inc.
thatIt has the most successful search engine in the world. [STRIKE] Despite /STRIKE] In spite of existingother competitors like Yahoo, Google Inc. continues to be No. 1 among search-engine competitors in Internet area. To be successful is not easy joband Google does it sbest. It hasprovides the best results for theirits users; they invest far more in technology than any other search-engine. ItísIt is known also as a company with the best work environment. They have figured out how to make money with advertisement but without losing their users, thus they have become one of the most profitable companies in the world. Google is an impressive enterprise.
(It must be rather formal style)