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    Default Could anyone proffering my text ?

    A friend of mine is turning a academic paper and needs translated for English a introduction of his work. I did the translations as best I can.
    Would be helpful if someone can look at it and check the grammar for me. I appreciate a lot.

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    Mauro

    Inversion of thought in the work of Henri Bergson
    With the realization of the difference and the mobility between the states of our inner life, we find in Heri Bergson’s work, the possibility of existence one type of metaphysic knowledge. For this mobility Bergson gave the name timing, or real time, which was directly opposite to the way science had been seen it. Whereas, he noted that traditional philosophy has been treated for many centuries the time and the mobility in the wrong way, had space with fundament and the impossibility of the metaphysic constituted as a reliable knowledge. This way, the philosopher brings to the sphere of philosophic speculation the mobility of life, giving a new approach to contact with reality which is pure mobility.

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    Default Re: Could anyone proffering my text ?

    Inversion of Thought in the Work of Henri Bergson

    With the realization of the difference and the mobility between the states of our inner life, we find in Henri Bergson’s work, the possibility of the existence of one type of metaphysic knowledge. For this mobility, Bergson gave the name “timing” or “real time” which was directly opposite to the way science had seen it.

    Whereas, he noted that traditional philosophy has treated time and mobility the wrong way for many centuries. This way, the philosopher brings to the sphere of philosophic speculation the mobility of life that provides a new approach to contact with reality which is pure mobility.

    “I don’t understand this part”
    …had space with fundament and the impossibility of the metaphysic constituted as a reliable knowledge.

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    Default Re: Could anyone proffering my text ?

    You need "metaphysical" in all cases and "philosophical" in the last line.

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