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chiko

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Dear Grace,

Thank for you email dated 28th may 2013 asking if you can be registerd to do our exams

I would like to inform you that currently there is no any changes in our syllabus .for you to sit for module D examination you are required to complete module c examination and not otherwise. If you were told that you will be eligible to sit for module D , i think it was a mistake ,we really apologize for inconvienience caused by that ,for more information on entry requirement , please visit our webist which will give you uselful information .

Thanks for you time ,

yours sincerly

Jane
 

probus

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Dear Grace,

Thank for you email dated 28th May 2013 asking if you can be registerd to do our exams

I would like to inform you that currently there is no any changes in our syllabus. For you to sit for module D examination you are required to first complete the module C examination. If you were told that you would be eligible to sit for module D, that was a mistake. We sincerely apologize for any inconvienience caused by that error. For more information on entry requirements, please visit our website which will give you useful information.

Yours sincerely,

Jane

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februar

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I'd say: Thank you for your email .................
 
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