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    Roya20 is offline Just Joined
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    Default Help to edit my letter please

    Hi everyone, I want to send the following email to my suervisour. I would be thankful if you edit or correct it.
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    Dear ...,
    I am sorry that I was sick and I could not attend in the meeting on Tuesday.
    As we discussed in our previous meeting I would like to apply for the summer school at leuven University this summer and before submitting my application I would like to ask for your advice and permission to select the course. I consider one of two following courses to register: “ content analysis and social network” but, I would like to choose the text analysis and learn more about content analysis as I already attended several courses about the social network before.
    I would be grateful if you advise me and give me your suggestion.
    P.S. Please find the information about courses in the following links:
    Text analysis : gyron internet ltd - premium uk dedicated servers, colocation, server management, web hosting and consultancy.
    Advanced Social network: gyron internet ltd - premium uk dedicated servers, colocation, server management, web hosting and consultancy.


    I am looking forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
    Your help and advice will be appreciated.

    Best regards,

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    EnglishFix is offline Member
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    Default Re: Help to edit my letter please

    Dear ...,

    I am sorry that I was sick and I could not attend the meeting on Tuesday.

    As we discussed in our previous meeting, I would like to apply for summer school at Leuven University this summer. Before submitting my application, I would like to ask for your advice and permission to select the courses. I am considering one of two of following courses: “ Content analysis and Social networks” but, I would like to choose the text analysis and learn more about content analysis as I have already attended several courses about social networks before.

    I would be grateful if you could advise me and give me your suggestions.

    P.S. Please find the information about courses in the following links:
    Text analysis : gyron internet ltd - premium uk dedicated servers, colocation, server management, web hosting and consultancy.
    Advanced Social network: gyron internet ltd - premium uk dedicated servers, colocation, server management, web hosting and consultancy.


    I am looking forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
    Your help and advice will be appreciated.

    Best regards,

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