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    change this into active voice and passive voice

    " In this process we have deployed our system on real-time client and server tiers. After our testing evaluation and most to the rough edges have been smoothed over as well as the elements that allow the customers to interact with the site has been reviewed we’re ready for feedback. The final process needs to be looked upon as a small project cycle in its’ own right. During this process we then refine, implement and retest the changes and presto a new web presence will emerge. "

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    Re: change this into active voice and passive voice

    Quote Originally Posted by ansa khan View Post
    " In this process we have deployed our system on real-time client and server tiers. After our testing evaluation and most to the rough edges have been smoothed over as well as the elements that allow the customers to interact with the site has been reviewed we’re ready for feedback. The final process needs to be looked upon as a small project cycle in its’ own right. During this process we then refine, implement and retest the changes and presto a new web presence will emerge. "
    It's already in active voice and passive voice. There are quite a few mistakes. You could use more commas. The second sentence doesn't make sense.

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    Re: change this into active voice and passive voice

    You're welcome to the forum, ansa khan, but please note that we do not provide free answers to students' homework, nor do we take kindly to instructions such as the title of your thread without a mention of the word 'please'.

    Rover

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