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    yellowribbon is offline Newbie
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    past works and personal description

    Following is part of a CV cover letter for a window display position, please correct all the mistakes.

    At work I create individual identity for the restaurant; display representation of each restaurant appropriately; attract people entering the premises so they can experience the dishes. Personally I am self and fashion conscious with sensible approach; interested in experiment colours. I have problem-solving ability, am able to select and visualise the right product so as to employ it to my design theme for the relevant projects.

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    Re: past works and personal description

    At work I create an individual identity for the restaurants with an appropriate display representation for each restaurant to attract people to enter the premises so they can experience the food. Personally, I am self and fashion conscious with a sensible approach and I am interested in experimental colours. I have problem-solving abilities and I am able to select and visualize the right products so as to employ them in my design theme for the relevant projects.

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