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    visiting guests

    Please help me correct the following paragraph.
    The other day, there was a school exchange day between Zhao-Dong Elementary School and Qing-Shui Elementary School. The students of Qing-Shui to be guests by visiting Zhao-Dong, which welcomed the visiting guests by drum dance and leicha (grounding tea) teaching. Besides, the host also prepared the game of “crawling through the ladder” to let both schools students revive the game of semi-century ago, experience the fun of crawling through the ladder.

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    Re: visiting guests

    Quote Originally Posted by Ashiuhto View Post
    Please help me correct the following paragraph.

    The other dayRecently, there was a school exchange day between Zhao-Dong Elementary School and Qing-Shui Elementary School. The students of Qing-Shui to be guests by visiting visited Zhao-Dong, which welcomed their visiting guests by with a drum dance and leicha (grounding tea) teaching. Besides The host also prepared revived the fifty-year-old game of “crawling through the ladder” to let so that both schools' students revive thegame of semi-century ago, could experience the fun of crawling through the ladder.
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