[Essay] My Neighborhood Is Convenient Area

[alialis]

My neighborhood is convenient area for many reasons. First, it is quiet and peaceful
And most residents areelderly people .Second; it is safe to the presence of people watching
Day andnight. Third, the shopping center is very nearby my home around 3-4 mintswalking.
Forth, playground it is just 1 mint from my home thatmake my kids happy and joyful all time and I can watching them easy even fromthe house. In concluding quite area, safe place, nearby shopping center and,close playground all these Advantages make my neighborhood convenient area.

 

[Grumpy]

I'm very happy for you that you live in such a convenient area.
However, you will have to let us know what help or advice you need.

 

[alialis]

my grammar is week can you cheek it

I'm very happy for you that you live in such a convenient area.
However, you will have to let us know what help or advice you need.

 

[SoothingDave]

My neighborhood is convenient area for many reasons. First, it is quiet and peaceful
And most residents areelderly people .Second; it is safe to the presence of people watching
Day andnight. Third, the shopping center is very nearby my home around 3-4 mintswalking.
Forth, playground it is just 1 mint from my home thatmake my kids happy and joyful all time and I can watching them easy even fromthe house. In concluding quite area, safe place, nearby shopping center and,close playground all these Advantages make my neighborhood convenient area.

To begin with, you have some random capitalization. Why are "advantages" and "day" capitalized?

"Mints" is not an abbreviation for "minutes." We use "min" for minutes, but I see no reason to abbreviate here.

You need to leave one space after each sentence ends. You have used a semicolon after "second" when it should be a comma. You have spelled "fourth" wrong. You used "quite" when you meant "quiet."

 

[alialis]

thanks ,I appreciate you.

To begin with, you have some random capitalization. Why are "advantages" and "day" capitalized?

"Mints" is not an abbreviation for "minutes." We use "min" for minutes, but I see no reason to abbreviate here.

You need to leave one space after each sentence ends. You have used a semicolon after "second" when it should be a comma. You have spelled "fourth" wrong. You used "quite" when you meant "quiet."

 

[CarloSsS]

[STRIKE]t[/STRIKE]Thanks,(space) I appreciate your help.

See my corrections above. Mind your gaps---a space comes after pretty much every punctuation mark (commas, colons, semicolons, periods etc.).

 

[emsr2d2]

my grammar is week can you cheek it

Before you post, check the spelling of all your words in a dictionary. "Week" is incorrect, it should be "weak". "Cheek" is incorrect, it should be "check". You also need to capitalise the first word of every sentence and put a single appropriate punctuation mark at the end of every sentence.

 

[alialis]

Good and useful observations and I'm trying to publisharticles and letters, that you help me to correct it on right way. I feel happywhen I find it corrected and revised. Thank you again. I expect you to help more in the next letter.

 

[Barb_D]

I expect you to help more in the next letter.

What do you mean by this?

 

[alialis]

I mean from my talk, I will be more accurate and is not easy to me to find a wrong and you maybe find a grammar mistake that I can not find .