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    Thumbs up please ,this english is correct?

    Could you tell me if this letter is correct, please?
    Many thanks.
    Is one letter for my request of job.
    hello gentlemen, my name is martino Papesso I'm 40 I live in Biella in Italy and I am writing to offer me as a driver of tank and tank container.I perform the profession of driver since 2002. Currently are immediately available because the company I I worked on tankers (cargo line) of LA SPEZIA(ITALY) closed. They are then ready to go.

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    Quote Originally Posted by martino papesso View Post
    Could you tell me if this letter is correct, please?
    Many thanks.
    Is one letter for my request of job.
    hello gentlemen, my name is martino Papesso I'm 40 I live in Biella in Italy and I am writing to offer me as a driver of tank and tank container.I perform the profession of driver since 2002. Currently are immediately available because the company I I worked on tankers (cargo line) of LA SPEZIA(ITALY) closed. They are then ready to go.
    Welcome to the forums, Martino. Is this an exercise that you are doing for learning English, or is it an actual letter you wish to write to look for employment?

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    Hi bhaisahab . Many thanks for your interest.

    I really am looking for a job as a truck driver and I have to send this letter to German companies.

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    In that case you should have it translated from Italian to German.

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    Also English is fine for companies that write.

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    Quote Originally Posted by martino papesso View Post
    Could you tell me if this letter is correct, please? There are many errors in your letter.
    Many thanks.
    Is one letter for my request of job. It is a job application letter.


    hello gentlemen, my name is martino Papesso I'm 40 I live in Biella in Italy and I am writing to offer me as a driver of tank and tank container.I perform the profession of driver since 2002. Currently are immediately available because the company I I worked on tankers (cargo line) of LA SPEZIA(ITALY) closed. They are then ready to go.
    Dear Sir/Madam

    I am writing to apply for a position as "Tank Driver/Tank Container Driver". I have been employed in this role since 2002 with [name of company you currently work for]. I am available for work immediately due to the closure of [name of company you worked for].

    Please advise me if you have any vacancies.

    Yours faithfully

    Martino Papesso
    Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.

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    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    Dear Sir/Madam

    I am writing to apply for a position as "Tank Driver/Tank Container Driver". I have been employed in this role since 2002 with [name of company you currently work for]. I am available for work immediately due to the closure of [name of company you worked for].

    Please advise me if you have any vacancies.

    Yours faithfully

    Martino Papesso
    Many thanks emsr2d2

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