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    Alzalzala is offline Newbie
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    this is correct?

    Hi. Please help me to check this sentence.

    "i want to make my moma proud, just for her, but i dont know how to make it real"

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    Re: this is correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by Alzalzala View Post
    Hi. Please help me to check this sentence.

    "I want to make my momma proud, just for her, but I don't know how to make it real."
    I have made corrections to your capitalisation, spelling and punctuation. I can't help you with the content because I don't know what you are trying to say. What do you mean by "make it real"?
    Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.

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