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    Hello and hye everyone, I have a simple question regarding name.......actually its a bout my business's name......i would like to use a word "integrated". Can i use "integrated" as a last words for example ( e.g.) like this " EXCEL INTEGRATED " but it look like a NOUN rite or should i use its as " EXCEL INTEGRATED MARKETING " . unfortunately i'm already choose a name for my business where it has a word "Integrated" in it and it like in my first example as i put it for example " EXCEL INTEGRATED " is it ok or wrong? Cause i dont want others to laugh at me when they heard or see my business name....pls help

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    Quote Originally Posted by featbit View Post
    Hello and hye everyone. I have a simple question regarding a name. Actually its a bout about my business's name. I would like to use a the word "integrated". Can I use "integrated" as a ​the last words word? For example ( e.g.) like this: "EXCEL INTEGRATED". but The problem is that it looks like a NOUN noun. rite Or should I use its it as "EXCEL INTEGRATED MARKETING"? Unfortunately i'm I have already choose chosen a name for my business where it which has a the word "Integrated" in it and, it like in my first example, as I put it for example chose "EXCEL INTEGRATED". Is it ok OK or is it wrong? Cause I don't want others to laugh at me when they heard hear or see my business name. pls Please help.
    Welcome to the forum.

    First, please look at the corrections I have made to your post in red. Remember the rules of written English:

    - Start every sentence with a capital letter.
    - End every sentence with a single appropriate punctuation mark.
    - Always capitalise the word "I" (first person singular).
    - Put a space after a full stop, comma, question mark or exclamation mark.
    - Do not put a space before a full stop, comma, question mark or exclamation mark.
    - Do not put a space after opening quotation marks.
    - Do not put a space before closing quotation marks.

    Now on to your question. There are no real grammar rules involved in business names. You can call your business anything you like and it's very unlikely that anyone will laugh at the name unless it is rude!
    It's difficult to tell whether your business name is appropriate without knowing what you do. Does it have something to do with Microsoft Excel, the database software? If so, what is it integrated with? Do you help companies to integrate Excel into the computer systems? Are you marketing Excel to companies?
    Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.

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    Thanks and sorry for my bad english....anyway, i'm really appreciate your words....actually English is not my mother's tongue......I welcomed your comments as its can improved my English....

    Thanks.....:)

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    Quote Originally Posted by featbit View Post
    Thanks and sorry for my bad English. Anyway, i'm I really appreciate your words. Actually English is not my mother's mother tongue. I welcomed your comments as its they can improved improve my English.

    Thanks. :)
    Look again at rule number 2 in the list I gave you. We put one single punctuation mark at a time. Do not connect your sentences with a series of full stops. I have amended it above again.
    Capitalise proper nouns, such as English.
    The plural of "it" is "they", not "its".
    Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.

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