As you have already read, that is far too wide a request. We can help you with specific aspects of English that you are having trouble with so feel free to post specific questions.
Originally Posted by solomonmarie
Look at the amendments I have made in red above. Don't use non-standard English (gonna/wanna etc). Use full English words.
I am moving this post to the general Ask A Teacher section of the forum as it has nothing to do with Teacher Training where you originally posted it.
Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.