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    abdallamath is offline Newbie
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    can someone help with giving feedback ?

    Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.
    In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? Has this been a positive or negative development?

    No doubt that the technology has made our life much more different comparing with early ages especially in communications side. Technology has changed the way that people interact with each other. Although, with all improvements that we see nowadays there are negative effects for such technology.

    First, technology had a real impact in relationships in business, educations and social life. For example, people from different countries can make business even if they did not meet each other. In education these days there are what people called online education, in which teachers and students can communicate through the internet. Even in our social life, we use to have many friends through the social networks such as facebook. Moreover, the mobility of the computers and smart phones have changed our relationships and how we communicate dramatically.

    Of course, the technology has made the communication much more easier. Think of students that the leave their country to go overseas, technology has made it easy for them to call and contact their parents every single day with almost no cost. However, it is clear also that there are some disadvantages for using the technology everywhere every time. A simple example for that, is the use of technology limits the real interaction between families. Also, it has been shown that using social networks such as facebook to make friendship is not the most suitable way for doing so .

    In conclusion, technology has created another dimension for communications among people, however, there are some drawbacks with using it extensively.


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    Re: can someone help with giving feedback ?

    When will you submit this essay to your teacher/tutor?
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