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    Is this letter is Ok

    Hi ,

    Is this below sentence is ok?

    "As discussed, Please arrange a meeting with your ICT team and it will be highly appreciable if your major ICT Stakeholder policy Committee member participate in the meetings."


    Thanks with Advance
    Abir

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    Re: Is this letter is Ok

    Quote Originally Posted by abir999999 View Post

    Is the following sentence is OK? Two sentences would be better.

    "As discussed, please arrange a meeting with your ICT team. It would be greatly appreciated if your major ICT Stakeholder policy committee member could be present."

    Thanks in advance.
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    Abir
    See my suggested improvements above.

    Rover

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