Is this below sentence is ok?
"As discussed, Please arrange a meeting with your ICT team and it will be highly appreciable if your major ICT Stakeholder policy Committee member participate in the meetings."
Thanks with Advance
Originally Posted by abir999999
Is the following sentence is OK? Two sentences would be better.
"As discussed, please arrange a meeting with your ICT team. It would be greatly appreciated if your major ICT Stakeholder policy committee member could be present."
Thanks in advance.
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See my suggested improvements above.