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    Ashiuhto is offline Senior Member
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    Please help me correct the following paragraph.

    Thanks for the gift you gave me as a souvenir. Since the scientific name of the gift in Chinese is read as "Fa-Cai-Shu", which means getting rich, I will follow the tips to take good care of it. Perhaps I will be wealthy some day. Besides, I would like to express my appreciation for your compliments and I dont' deserve such honor. You are so nice, considerate and thoughtful. Keep good working!

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    Thanks for the gift you gave me as a souvenir. Since the scientific name of the gift in Chinese is read as "Fa-Cai-Shu", which means getting rich, I will follow the tips to take good care of it. Perhaps I will be wealthy some day. Besides, I would like to express my appreciation for your compliments and I don't deserve such honor. You are so nice, considerate and thoughtful. Keep up the good work!

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    I would replace "Besides" with "Also".
    Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.

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