[General] deserve such honor

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Ashiuhto

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Please help me correct the following paragraph.

Thanks for the gift you gave me as a souvenir. Since the scientific name of the gift in Chinese is read as "Fa-Cai-Shu", which means getting rich, I will follow the tips to take good care of it. Perhaps I will be wealthy some day. Besides, I would like to express my appreciation for your compliments and I dont' deserve such honor. You are so nice, considerate and thoughtful. Keep good working!
 

EnglishFix

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Thanks for the gift you gave me as a souvenir. Since the scientific name of the gift in Chinese is read as "Fa-Cai-Shu", which means getting rich, I will follow the tips to take good care of it. Perhaps I will be wealthy some day. Besides, I would like to express my appreciation for your compliments and I don't deserve such honor. You are so nice, considerate and thoughtful. Keep up the good work!
 

emsr2d2

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I would replace "Besides" with "Also".
 
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