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    Default Could anyone please check out any mistakes in my appeal letter?

    My name:XXX
    My address:XXX
    My phone: XXX
    Date:XXXX

    The address of recipient person:


    Re: letter of appeal(The application UID )
    Dear Sir(s)/Madam(s),



    I am a candidate for TG2 Master mobility for the project Erasmus Mundus A 2 SALAM for Iran, Iraq and Yemen, and I feel that my candidature was not assessed properly. I am writing to you to appeal a reconsideration in processing my application form.


    Although I was not surprised when I received a rejection letter from SALAM Project Coordinator for Erasmus Mundus Action 2- Lot 7, I was extremely disappointed. I knew when I applied in February 6th 2013 that my Home University I have been working for was not listed in the drop-down menu of the third-country Partner Universities, although about six other Yemeni partner universities were listed. However, as long as there was an ability of stating a home university. I have stated my Home University there, then I attached the "Proof of registration" issued by my home university. In addition, I had the sufficient score in English along with all the other documents needed by host universities.


    I feel somehow that my application was only refused because I stated my Home University in my personal information. However, if so, you wouldn't let text box of Home university be accessible. Although I have been a teaching assistant at Hadramout University in Yemen since 2007 until now, I didn't know why my Home University wasn't listed in the drop-down menu. So I had to state my home university and attached the proof of registration issued by it.


    I fully understand and respect your decision to deny my application, but I do hope you will reopen my file to consider this new information. I am tremendously impressed by EU universities, and I would most like to be a student at one of them. I appreciate the time that you have taken to read my appeal.
    Yours faithfully,
    My name



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    Default Re: Could anyone please check out any mistakes in my appeal letter?

    You have already posted this in "Letter Writing". Please don't duplicate posts. I am closing this thread.
    Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.

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