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    RizwanAhmedMemon is offline Newbie
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    Post Lets everybody share your writing and then check it together

    Here is my piece of writing. Check it, and tell me all the improvements that you think should be there. Help me be a good writer.


    Lonely Days Without You
    Writer: Rizwan Ahmed Memon
    Date: 16/6/2013

    Again it's raining today, and I feel your absence more deeply. We would have been together long ago, but these people have been obstacle in our way. Some say, I don't earn, others say I won't be able to deal with the challenges of life. However, I would do my best, and my God will help me as always, and I will show everyone that I can do anything in life.

    I have done such extraordinary things being in a society, where hardly anyone does. I went to university, which is my highest achievement, I learned computer and English. I consider them my achievements. If they say I have not done anything, can't they see my these achievements? Soon I will complete my university, then I will get you anyhow, and my lonely days would cease to exist. I would put my all energy and skills in my work, so I would make at least enough money to keep you happy and fulfill your wishes.

    Without you I am worried most of the time. People keep me hurting, but I believe when you would come my all the worries would disappear, and my all the wounds which people have caused me would heal completely.

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    abir999999 is offline Newbie
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    Re: Lets everybody share your writing and then check it together

    In reference of your subject line I want to say. Yes, that's a way to improve written English.

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    billmcd is offline Key Member
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    Re: Lets everybody share your writing and then check it together

    Are you familiar with the word/terms "please" and "thank you"?

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